i would not put a lot of faith in that check valve you have there. if it was from HD or Lowes it will contain a steel spring in it. that will rust an fail in a very short time in the SW environment. there are all plastic flapper check valves available, but even they are risky. they can become encrusted in Ca build up and not work when needed. it is better to get a bigger sump. i use a 50g Rubbermaid feeding stock tank for my sump. i think it was around $60 at the local feed store.
as for the drain. do you have room to put in a
Durso standpipe in the overflow? this will help significantly on the noise. do a search either on here or on the net for Durso standpipe, even a Stockman stovepipe might work for you. you can see if either of these will fit in your overflow.
not a big fan of the SCWD. robs to much flow. might not be that bad with the amount of head pressure that the Mag 12 already has though.
G~